burneplasmafire

Hey there!  I'm not dead, I just haven't written anything in a while.
          	
          	I've got a lot of new ideas for stories so I'm going to get back to it. Have a nice day! :)

burneplasmafire

Hey guys!
          
          Just a line to let you know that I am making progress with the writing.  It seems that the next story to update will be The Maw of Despair.  I'll be leaving it as a buffer like I did with No Way Home Part 3, but hopefully you won't be waiting a whole month to read it.
          
          In the meantime, here's a teaser:
          
          
          Caroline was asleep moments after her head met the bedroll. Her slumber was not entirely forgettable, though. As she dreamed, the image of Princess Irena drifted into her mind. If this was indeed another vision, then the haziness of dreams allowed Caroline to see it without the overwhelming vibrance.
          
          She was convinced that it was a vision when Irena told her, "Do not take the mountain pass. It may seem the swiftest route, but it is guarded."
          
          "How do you know that it is guarded?" Caroline tried to ask, but Irena's image had faded already. There was no reply.

GladiatorInSuit

Hi there! I'm new to the community and I'm loving "No Way Home"! I was wondering if you woukd like to read my story, "Celestial". If not...I understand!

GladiatorInSuit

@burneplasmafire  Thanks for the advice! My brother said the same thing! Can't wait to read part 3!
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burneplasmafire

@Avatardis13 I did have a look.  If I might offer some advice, going into a flashback in the opening stages of a story is a bit jarring for the reader.  Perhaps, keep going right up until the point when you absolutely have to go back and explain some things. :)
            
            Aside from that, it seems like a good premise and I might read it a bit more.
            
            Glad you're enjoying No Way Home.  I think I'll post Part 3 now, actually, since it's been in buffer for a month or something. ;)
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