carme1awrites
guys im really considering on rewriting when the stars forget us starting from when talia leaves with Bella and Alice. i fear talia as a character just wouldn’t do that to Embryyy. but then again if i do, how would i introduce Alec?? in the aftermath of the newborn fight?? idkkkk
Khloe0662
YESSS!!! Talia is WAY to sweet to do that but Yess definitely I LOVEEE this fanfic
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alwaysn4everurs
@carme1awrites I think it’s perfect as is- because yes she wouldn’t do that to embry but it also makes the loss of Bella so much more emotional because she literally loved Bella so much that she chose her over her own imprint. Something Bella wouldn’t even do for her if it came down to her or Edward. I feel like that can lead to more character depth for Bella in the future as well, feeling like she owes it to her friend. ( maybe even in a reconciliations in the future ) just an opinion (:
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