Firstly, I love the chapbook, the first 4-5 poems placed me in your shoes for a few minutes, I voted for them immediately. As I kept reading your work kept me interested but it felt like eating dinner without salt and pepper if you know what I mean. My poetry writing professor told me all semester to add more images to my work to better convey my overall message. I relay that message to you as I struggle with this myself. Never stop writing your far from terrible!