Hey guys :D It’s been a while since I asked you for something, but I really need a favour this time. Could you check out my latest chapter, "Chapter 22: By Yield, By Fall, By Death"?
I’d love your opinions on the fight scene. I’ve never written one before, especially in first‑person. I had fun imagining the duel between Arthur and Evelina, but I’m not sure if it was easy to picture or if I should tweak some parts. You don’t have to read all the other chapters (though it’d be cool if you did...:>), I just need feedback on that ONE scene. Pretty please?