DarkWorld336

Yeh ..I missed you bro, keep giving your feedback, it will help in shaping the stories..
          
          I love your reviews which are genuine you know...
          
          

chandu2020

Readers could feel the obsession and possesivenes he carries around her 
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chandu2020

One thing i should mention is u did justice to the word obsession in ved's character .
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chandu2020

@DarkWorld336 as u already said  the story as dark themed romance , obsession , and violence . 
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