cherry_bl0ss0m

Haha no worries! You wrote it so well it felt real though! Do they always get into this much chaos, or was this a special occasion? Btw Your story is amazing! As a paid artist, I couldn’t help but imagine some of the scenes as illustrations. I actually have a few ideas for how they could look visually would you like me to share them?

Your pacing and atmosphere make it feel like I'm watching everything happen in front of me. You build tension in such a simple but powerful way. Loved this chapter.