christiangreybae

For those who are expecting an update for my book am working on it and its going to be here soon give me time please. thank you all so much.

TaniHanes

Thanks for reading all about Pete and Daisy and blitzing up the votes ❣️I hope you’re enjoying their story ❣️

christiangreybae

I love love it. So much. I finished the first two books and started on the third in like 2/3 days. Almost done with the third now. Very well done I sincerely commend you for such hardwork and talent.
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Meeeeouch

I'm not jumping down your throat. Sorry if it seems like I am. I just wanted to give you some insight on how to keep your readers coming back for more!
          You asked to be nice because it was your first story, which is good. Now come up with a sentence at the end of each chapter to remind them to vote and comment. People look at numbers for stories they wanting to read.  Reads - Comments - Stars. How often you update. Do you answer questions from each chapter for your followers.  How long chapters are. 
          There was this one girl who would write(she's on this sight. I thought it was FF)....lets say 500 words. Between each paragraph should skip down 10 lines and start another one. It looks goofy. She wanted to make it feel like you're scrolling a lot, but you are reading practically nothing.

Meeeeouch

You say this is your first story?  To keep your followers happy you have to at the least update twice a month. You have to make them want to follow your story. You haven't updated in over 7 months you should be up to chapter 18 -25 by now. You should leave cliffhangers at most of your chapters. You have to make them want to come back for the juicy part that left off from the chapter before.
           For being a first timer. Starting out with a lemon(sex scene) was ballsy.  If you have trouble with lemons, I've told other writers who asked....jump around from story to story and find the sex scenes or Google 50 shades sex scenes or there are other stories of here that have good ones. Reading them helped the others get into the groove of writing them. 
          I tell ya I couldn't write a sex scene if my life depended on it. Lmao. But I'm good at some guidance.