Naomi

Thank you for the critique I really appreciate it :D

the chpter is short because the contest entry is no longer then 300 words lol. anyways, thanks for the review!

Thank you for your critiquing :D I will do something about it :) 

AAHH NOMI!!!

Hey I have this story but I'm not entirely sure about it, so I really need something to look it over and maybe edit and give some feedback? Good or bad it doesn't matter :)
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/2197136-second-best-rae-and-callum's-story-second-best
          
          Help me out please?

thanx 4 fanning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Need something to read??? Any suggestions!?

Hey there! Thanks for being my editor. P.s= this is my user name just so you know ;P
          
          Oh and I too love 'how I met your mother' . Freaking hilarious show! XD

@Pegasus_Patronus  Yeah i'll read it now. Sorry haven't been on wattpad for  a while so couldn't do it sooner. BTW- love the username, love harry potter!!

er, hi, i was just wondering whether you would edit my story for me. I just finished it and im making it better quality at the moment. i dont know any editor at the moment cuz iv only been here for a week, plz could you rea it through for me? thanx much hannah.
          http://www.wattpad.com/2011291-1-the-other-legend-of-hogwarts