I'm trying my hand at writing for the first time.

My short story A Fleeting Chance is my first attempt, so please have a read and leave me some feedback. Positive or negative I don't mind, I just want to know what strangers think to my ideas.

have been working on my second story, set in the same universe as A Fleeting Chance focussing on a sniper for hire who launches a one man war against the organised crime families of the Rhemus system. After running out of inspiration this has gone on hold.

I am now working on a different book, again same universe, following a young space adventurer and his crew on board the "Grey Star".
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claphamc claphamc May 19, 2015 09:00AM
OK, so my second book ran out of inspiration. I've moved onto another book, almost finished chapter 1, be up in the next few days. would love to hear feedback.
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Arken and the Siren: The Adventures of the Grey Star by claphamc
Arken and the Siren: The Adventure...
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A Fleeting Chance by claphamc
A Fleeting Chance
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A Memory Lost by claphamc
A Memory Lost
Alone.. or am I? Where am I and How did I get here? Maybe one day I'll remember it all.
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