hi hon, i did take a peek and i think the writing is very creative and i love how detailed you made certain moments! please continue to write and express yourself, you’re already incredible at it! My only problem is your main character being a minor, which is concerning if her love interest truly is rick. im guessing you’re also young and a minor so you might not think much is wrong about it, but it paints rick in an uncharacteristic and disturbing light because he would ever be interested in a child (yes, 17 is still a child to anyone who is a grown adult i promise you). its not my intention to be mean, its simply my input for you, as its a bit unsettling to read. Rick is undoubtedly not that kind of character. Again, i assume you’re also a minor and i understand where you’re coming from, and encourage you to keep writing and being creative, but i cannot support a book that pairs rick with a minor.
