Hi there! Just wanted to drop by and tell you that I really enjoyed your story the other Collin's brother! It has a good plot and I really like the characters! I normally don't find that many undiscovered authors that write as well as you! Only thing I'd have to say is watch you spelling! In chapter four I think you spelled Aaron Arron. Not a grammar Nazi, I can still understand what you're saying, just trying to be helpful! Has good potential to become a really good book!! Have a good day!!(: