Larpyr

Sorry if I bug you but while reading through the Story again I came up with a few suggestions who the "master" could be thanks to him caring for (who I think is Dick from another world, please correct me if I´m wrong). Anyway incase you don´t really know who it could be and it´d help you in your part then I could list some that I came up with.
          … again sorry if I text you too much XD

Larpyr

@ Larpyr  ok thanks I'm on it!
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cookie_job

@ Larpyr  yeah that could work I guess. And it would make more sense since people that would normally recognise him didn't
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Larpyr

@ Larpyr  Yeah I know that they would be only a few of the masters but if I'll write that tgeb it kinda has to be a variation of dick... if you're Not ok with it the maybe how about he is Not the only One that Works for them?
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Larpyr

Hi! Long time no see XD
          I have a Question... :D

Larpyr

@ Larpyr  well I thought about the part where I am hit with the fear Gas but I don't know when that is in the story... and I don't know who exactly the boss is...
            But thanks for the feedback:D
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cookie_job

@ Larpyr  Yeah, we could totally use devil's breath since I don't really know what else could fit the uses we want it to fill for the story. I haven't finished reading all of your part yet but so far it's extremely good! I'm amazed by how you handled it! You can start your next part if you want. I think it's the part were the final boss is revealed to everyone? But if you have any other suggestions, I'm all ears.
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Larpyr

Ok I posted it. I though that for the drug we could take "Devil´s breath, which messes with the Memory of the consumer and Maybe an exothermic reaction in order to increase the temperature to it´s boiling Point. NaOH + HCL -> NaCl+H2O could be used in our Story. However you can decide on that. 
            Also how did you like my part? Do you have any Questions in order to understand it?
            And should I also start writing my next part? What is it?
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Larpyr

Did you finish your Original Story? I Really want to learn more about your character

Larpyr

@Larpyr it's Alright im just asking
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cookie_job

@ Larpyr  Soon, I promise! I've been really busy with, well, life, plus my part of the story. I'm really sorry that it's taking me so long to finish! Promise it won't take much longer!
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AtticusBuffkell

Thanks for adding 'The Third Brother' to your reading list!

AtticusBuffkell

@ArdenBothell 
            Oh okay, well I hope you like it. And also...thanks for adding my other stories to your reading lists, it means a lot to me! It really does!
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cookie_job

@ ArdenBothell  No problem! I've been meaning to read it for a while now, I'm interested in what might happen!
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