@freeradicalkik
I really liked how you story just picked up in the middle of their lives it wasn't like there was a long and boring lead up to the good stuff with was very nice and I like that the main female character is feisty. I will be waiting for an update. Your story is very good you get a tumbs up ;)
If you could I know you must be very busy and all but if you ever get the time could you check out my short story The Island. Thanks and I love you story, byes