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I'm writing again! I have been so stressed about school that I wasn't able to put fingers to keyboard for a week. Now I'm feeling relaxed and inspired, so expect a new chapter quite soon. Also, don't freak out, but I may be going back and changing the beginning, adding more stuff and starting the story earlier. I expect the story will need five or more solid edits before it is anywhere near complete, so I hope everyone is OK with a changing story as I go back and edit and rearrange! Anyway, as always, tell me what you think, I love to hear feedback, especially constructive criticism! And any Brits out there, PLEASE let me know if I am misusing British terms or slang! I'm only a poor Californian with little understanding of the English language. :) 

Nah, it's not mean to hope your story emotionally affects the readers. And I'm glad there'll be more in store for Erica.

@SmallFlightlessBird, honestly I chose it because it is a British name that was a plausible choice for an educated middle-class couple's child. I'm sorry it made you sad! :( But I am glad it almost made you cry. I know that's mean, but what I mean is I'm glad my story is affecting you emotionally! :) There will definitely be more of her in the story, although I haven't decided what is next for her. 

@coyotelaughing Hey Coy, I'd like to see a continuation of Erica Aldred's story. I'm sad about Theo. WHY THEO?! The name is special to me. That chapter almost made me cry. I'm curious to see whether she meets up with the painter or the army gal first... My bet is on the painter, but we'll have to see.
          Sad day for Theo. T-T

Hey everybody! I'm at a bit of an impasse here with my writing. I have a few more characters to introduce, and then just continuation of the plots of other characters. The problem is, I'm not quite sure who I should concentrate on next. So, do you have a favorite character or one you'd like to hear more about? Please let me know!

@FallingInTheDark Ugh I love it so much. It's just...really good.

Thank you so much for checking out Dear Brother, it means so much to me because I'm entering it into the Wattys.

A new chapter is up! Meet the second villain, Seth Fleming! He's a bad bloke. Please tell me what you think, I'd love some feedback!

@FallingInTheDark Sure! I really like Painting John. I'm going to look at your other stories!

I loved The Plague of Bloo! Could you check out another story of mine? @coyotelaughing