coyotelaughing

I'm writing again! I have been so stressed about school that I wasn't able to put fingers to keyboard for a week. Now I'm feeling relaxed and inspired, so expect a new chapter quite soon. Also, don't freak out, but I may be going back and changing the beginning, adding more stuff and starting the story earlier. I expect the story will need five or more solid edits before it is anywhere near complete, so I hope everyone is OK with a changing story as I go back and edit and rearrange! Anyway, as always, tell me what you think, I love to hear feedback, especially constructive criticism! And any Brits out there, PLEASE let me know if I am misusing British terms or slang! I'm only a poor Californian with little understanding of the English language. :)

coyotelaughing

I'm writing again! I have been so stressed about school that I wasn't able to put fingers to keyboard for a week. Now I'm feeling relaxed and inspired, so expect a new chapter quite soon. Also, don't freak out, but I may be going back and changing the beginning, adding more stuff and starting the story earlier. I expect the story will need five or more solid edits before it is anywhere near complete, so I hope everyone is OK with a changing story as I go back and edit and rearrange! Anyway, as always, tell me what you think, I love to hear feedback, especially constructive criticism! And any Brits out there, PLEASE let me know if I am misusing British terms or slang! I'm only a poor Californian with little understanding of the English language. :)

coyotelaughing

@SmallFlightlessBird, honestly I chose it because it is a British name that was a plausible choice for an educated middle-class couple's child. I'm sorry it made you sad! :( But I am glad it almost made you cry. I know that's mean, but what I mean is I'm glad my story is affecting you emotionally! :) There will definitely be more of her in the story, although I haven't decided what is next for her.

coyotelaughing

Hey everybody! I'm at a bit of an impasse here with my writing. I have a few more characters to introduce, and then just continuation of the plots of other characters. The problem is, I'm not quite sure who I should concentrate on next. So, do you have a favorite character or one you'd like to hear more about? Please let me know!