@cristophermendoza55
I need your help, reply to this with your opinion. And let me know what I can do, to make you feel more. into the story's any tips will be taken into mind and try to make the story's better
thanks, cristophermendoza55
well, it isn't much of a matter of what you say, it's how you say it, one of the rules is that you have to start a new paragraph every time that somebody is talking in your book. In fact I'll just post some of them to you.
1. Use quotation marks around the words which the character says:
2. Begin a new paragraph each time a different person speaks – this can help to cut down on the number of dialogue tags required.
3. Only the exact words of a person are in quotation marks. Also, when splitting a quotation with a dialogue tag, do not capitalize words which do not begin new sentences.
4. When several sentences are quoted together to form a paragraph, put just one set of quotation marks around the whole quotation. (except for dialogue tags).
5. Periods and commas are always placed inside the quotation marks.
6. An exclamation point (!) or a question mark (?) is placed inside the quotation marks when it punctuates a quotation, but outside the quotation when it punctuates the main sentence.