Kaycee

Could you please critique my book Forgotten Island? It's grammatical-error-free, promise!

HI sorry to bother but could you critic my book (Dear M,) I'd really want to try to improve it

Hi there! I see that you already have a list of people requesting critiques so I understand if this takes you time. But could you please critique my book Brave Face? I really appreciate it and thank you so much in advance :)

Do you mind checking out my story?

Would you mind checking out my story Affliction and leaving feedback in the comments? It'd be greatly appreciated! Thank you! 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/35173108-affliction

Hey, can you please judge this? :)
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/34101839-broken-me

Please, take a look at my work.  It's currently in a beginning phase, but I would like to see how I am doing with it.
          
          http://w.tt/1DM0LAV

judge this----> http://www.wattpad.com/story/32088079
          
          title "guns are good so are cancer and cigarettes"

Hello. I am DarrieTheCriticChic, and I am recruiting new members for the "CriticismCrew"
          
          I am only accepting 2 other people. And you are the 1 of 2 that I am inviting.
          
          If you would like to be apart of this crew, please go to my message board, and answer the few questions.
          
          And you only have 1 week to answer, and after that, you validation expires, and you will have to run against anyone else who would wish to partake.
          
          Thank you.
          
          ~DarrieTheCriticChic

I LOVE your username!!11!