@day_dreamer238 yup no problem:) I understand how you feel. I was just reading some stories that I wrote in like 6th grade and I was like Holy crap, these suck!
@_NiallAndI_ thank you so much love I appreciate it. I agree honestly, some of the errors reading back at them honestly make me cringe I wish I did take a little more time reading over the story. However the book was first written almost 2 years ago I think. I wish I could just re write the whole thing. I might edit and fix it up soon, and maybe add a part 2. Thank you for your feedback and support it means a lot❤️
@day_dreamer238 I really like the concept of Liam's Sister but I think that a way to improve it would be to fix all of the grammatical errors. Please don't take this the wrong way. You're very creative and an amazing writer, but editing the story would surely get you more votes.
aww thats soo sweet and it means so much, thank you. I'm currently super busy but I'm definitely going to read your stories, I've already read a bit and it seems good so far, I've added both to my library :) Xx