daughting159

Hey thank you for following me I appreciate it if you could check out one of my books 

daydreamer51821

@daughting159 So I just wanted to start off by saying that the general plot of your books are on point!(I particularly like the story I voted on) However, if you are looking to get more readers, you are going to need to work on completing your stories before starting a new book. I noticed that you had alot of short stories and most of them weren't completed, or hadn't even been started. Try and work to sticking with one book before you move on to the next. If you have an Idea for a book just draft it. You can still write two or three or four at a time. Just try to stick to completing one book at a time, it makes readers happy. Trust me! Also I'm not saying this to nag at you or anything like that! But I think you need to consider asking someone to edit your book for you. If you wanted I could even help you out. And the reason I say this is because your punctuation and grammar could use a little work. As well as some tweeking, with your sentence structure. Like I said, the plot and setting is great! You just need to consider editing. Okay! That's all, I'll stop nagging you ;) haha. Keep up rhe good work! 
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bewilderedgardens

Total book lover too!! ;-) 

daydreamer51821

@aveonalily Same girl! I checked out your profile, and I totally agree writing is A LOT harder than it looks. Especially when it comes to trying to grab your readers attention. But hey! It's all worth it! I loveeeeeeee books! Probably to much I tend to stay up way later than I should as well. 
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Illeandir

Hey, thank you for adding Dragon Nymph to your reading list! I'm glad you liked it.

daydreamer51821

@Illeandir  Yeah! No problem! I haven't had the chance to read all of it but I'm loving it so far. Hey could you possibly do me a favor? You do not need to feel obligated to do so. But I would really appreciate some help with my book. I'd really like some constructive criticism, from one writer to another. Especially one whom is writing a fantasy book themselves. And seeing as you are?? Could you possibly read my book? Tell me what you think of it so far?? And maybe get the word out about it?? I'd really appreciate it!! Thanks :) 
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