@daughting159 So I just wanted to start off by saying that the general plot of your books are on point!(I particularly like the story I voted on) However, if you are looking to get more readers, you are going to need to work on completing your stories before starting a new book. I noticed that you had alot of short stories and most of them weren't completed, or hadn't even been started. Try and work to sticking with one book before you move on to the next. If you have an Idea for a book just draft it. You can still write two or three or four at a time. Just try to stick to completing one book at a time, it makes readers happy. Trust me! Also I'm not saying this to nag at you or anything like that! But I think you need to consider asking someone to edit your book for you. If you wanted I could even help you out. And the reason I say this is because your punctuation and grammar could use a little work. As well as some tweeking, with your sentence structure. Like I said, the plot and setting is great! You just need to consider editing. Okay! That's all, I'll stop nagging you ;) haha. Keep up rhe good work!