daydreameryanna

I edited "BAKIT MAARTE SI EVA?" because I wanted to fix the narrative voice. When I first wrote it, I used third person so readers could observe her from the outside and gradually understand who she is and why she’s that way. But I realized that approach was very limiting, so I decided to rewrite it in first person instead. I also changed some details in hopes of making the story better.
          	
          	More than just a romance, this story is my way of expressing the complexities of womanhood — the quiet battles, the expectations, and what it means to be a woman in today’s world. That’s why I’m determined to finish it.

daydreameryanna

I edited "BAKIT MAARTE SI EVA?" because I wanted to fix the narrative voice. When I first wrote it, I used third person so readers could observe her from the outside and gradually understand who she is and why she’s that way. But I realized that approach was very limiting, so I decided to rewrite it in first person instead. I also changed some details in hopes of making the story better.
          
          More than just a romance, this story is my way of expressing the complexities of womanhood — the quiet battles, the expectations, and what it means to be a woman in today’s world. That’s why I’m determined to finish it.