BirtheV

Hey, thanks for adding Swift as a Coursing River to your reading list! <3

BirtheV

@ddawski Oh, you live in the Netherlands, cool! I suspect some cultural aspects might be similar then. Have you ever read While the Sun Shines? It's a queer romance here on Wattpad and it takes place in the Netherlands (and it was written by one of my writer friends for full disclaimer).
            
            Thank you very much for the offer! Since I'm pretty much updating as I write, I'm mostly doing my own editing, so I can at least get the chapter out a little faster. But as I said, I always like hearing a second opinion, even after the chapter is already published xD. There are some chapters I'm not entirely happy with, even after editing, so I always appreciate other people's insight!
            
            And I'll definitely keep your offer in mind for future projects, which I plan to write offline. Because I very much do like the idea of a second pair of eyes! Though with Wattpad removing the DM feature very soon, that makes it a lot harder to share things on Wattpad if you don't want everyone (in theory) to have access to it. If you know Discord, that's where I mostly do that kind of thing these days xD. In any case, you will hopefully be getting a new SaaCR chapter on Sunday <3.
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ddawski

@BirtheV of course no problem! I’m living in the Netherlands right now, so some benelux representation is cool to see  I didn’t meant that I have any criticism to give, I just know other authors on here sometimes prefer to get a second pair of eyes if they are struggling with a chapter. If that’s not your style, do your thing! Looking forward to more chapters of this book, and your future plans :)
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BirtheV

@ddawski Hey, sorry for my late reply, I was abroad. Thank you very much! I find it important to show that queer characters are not alone, that there's this whole queer community out there. And especially with this story, since it's really about finding identity and belonging through community. (Pretty much the only reason it's set in Belgium is that *I'm* from Belgium and in this sort of thing, I'm of the opinion I might as well write what I know. There's already more than enough stories set in the US or UK on Wattpad.)
            
            I always appreciate constructive criticism! Once SaaCR is done, I'll publish a chapter with questions about all kinds of aspects of the story, for future improvement. So you can give me opinions then or whenever you like, on everything from typos to major plotholes xD. I don't have plans for major edits, though, since I already have more than enough to write and I want to focus more on queer women.
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