redvoution

Can you check out my stories and gave am your opinion on it

redvoution

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december_x

Hey, I didn’t read your books but I did have a quick look. You should space your sentences out, so that you have paragraphs instead of it being continuous. Usually you start a new paragraph/sentence when your having a conversation so that it’s obvious to the reader that it is a different person talking. If you change this I feel like your completed book would be much easier to read 
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