defyingxstars

Heyo everyone
          	So lately I’ve been noticing a bit of viewings on my TMNT Fanfiction 
          	I wrote this when I was like 11-12 and posted it when I joined Wattpad 2 years ago.
          	I know 2 years wasn’t THAT long ago, but I definitely have a improved some in writing and such.
          	
          	So as of last night I’ve been going back through the chapters and editing them, so the story wouldn’t be as triggering,dramatic, and most of all cringey lol. The main drastic difference I made was the beginning of the story, but I’m sure I’ll find more changes to make along the way.
          	
          	So if you have read it already
          	Maybe if you have time or if your interested go back and read it again and see if you like it better with the changes I’ve made.
          	
          	Thankyou

defyingxstars

Heyo everyone
          So lately I’ve been noticing a bit of viewings on my TMNT Fanfiction 
          I wrote this when I was like 11-12 and posted it when I joined Wattpad 2 years ago.
          I know 2 years wasn’t THAT long ago, but I definitely have a improved some in writing and such.
          
          So as of last night I’ve been going back through the chapters and editing them, so the story wouldn’t be as triggering,dramatic, and most of all cringey lol. The main drastic difference I made was the beginning of the story, but I’m sure I’ll find more changes to make along the way.
          
          So if you have read it already
          Maybe if you have time or if your interested go back and read it again and see if you like it better with the changes I’ve made.
          
          Thankyou

defyingxstars

What's the best advice any other fellow writers could give me about writing romance stories...More specifically ways to make the reader feel more connected to the characters and their relationship??? :)

Quiet6Midnight

@defyingxstars maybe make small moments happen like nice sweet gestures or even more small things like sitting on a roof together enjoying the scenery. I'm more of a poet but gestures can go a long way and key moments can make an impact
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