MochiSpaceMoose222

Heyyyy!! (Sorry if I'm like... Annoying.)
          
          Just wanted to drop and ask if you've got any new thoughts on the TNWLB series! Like... What do you think of the new updates? Or NTB and MHiRC? 
          
          The first bit of feedback you gave a while ago was actually really useful for me so anything new would be awesome.

derMUc

@MochiSpaceMoose222 it was awesome man not ooc at all that very Killua of him just like he did with Alluka in the last arc where he tries to seel away nanika so the zoldycks won't use her and to free Alluka  his obsession with Ayame his sister is very in line for the zoldycks and their unconventional affection for their family and loved ones
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MochiSpaceMoose222

@derMUc 
            
            Yeah, you pretty much hit it on the nail there lol
            
            You really go into detail like WOW. OKAY.
            
            While we're talking, what did you think of the final arc about the whole "Killua deleting Pinpoint: Buffer"? Like... Was it any good or was it too much?? Was Killua OOC at all? Was his slight obsession with "getting Ayame back" too much?
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derMUc

@MochiSpaceMoose222 killua and Ayame are written in a way that their platonic bond is clear and true. Once the two met Gon in the hunter exam he slowly but surely became a part of their rotation. Gon also cares about Ayame a lot and sees her as his sister he's willing to introduce her as such to Kite and Ging but he's still selfish in the sense that he's very ready and willing to rely on her fully which is Gon's way of showing he loves and trusts someone as he's done with Killua in the canon material—note the constant "it has to be killua" throughout the manga and anime. It might just be because he's an only child who didn't grow up with any kids his age that their treatment of their friends and sister is so different. Killua grew up with a lot of siblings so it's easy for him to have a more nurturing perspective on Ayame, Gon on the other hand grew up surrounded by animals and the laws of nature I.e. the strong defeat the weak and so he's fixated on Aya's strength and what it can provide him more so then the strain of upholding this role as protector and strong older sibling that was pushed on her. Ayame doesn't know any other way to show her love for her friends other then to lend them her strength and even her life for the sake of their happiness  
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MochiSpaceMoose222

HEYYYYY!!! Just wanted to drop in and say thanks for adding "The Names We Left Behind" to your treasure trove! You can't even begin to COMPREHEND how much that means to me. Like, actually. It doesn't get a lot of attention, which kinda breaks my heart and crushes my soul a little, but when it does, I flip out. Same goes for my other stories. ANYWAY. Feel free to comment your thoughts on it! Constructive critisism is always welcome, also, if there's any like... grammatical errors, please say something, and I'll fix it. There's probably a bunch, but I'm not gonna go though an find them myself cuz I'm lazy. Thanks again! <3

derMUc

@MochiSpaceMoose222 lol no problem this was fun I never really get to talk to anyone on here ✌️you seem very sweet and genuine I hope that never changes 
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MochiSpaceMoose222

Edited version cuz I'm illiterate in my own writing.
            
            So first, thanks for the feedback! Second, I appreciate the votes! Third, I noticed you also added "Never Truly Buried" to your treasure trove, so thanks for that as well. Fourth, thank you for actually responding. I try to reach out to people, but they all just kinda ignore me, so you're like a breath of fresh air fr. Finally, I'll stop bothering you now and sorry if I wasted your time lol
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MochiSpaceMoose222

So first, thanks for the feedback! Second, I appreciate the votes! Third, I noticed you also added "Never Truly Buried" to your treasure trove, so thanks for that as well. Fourth, thank you for actually responding. I try to reach out to people, but they all just kinda ignore me, so you're like a breath of fresh air fr. Finally, I'll stop bothering you now and sorry if I your time lol
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