@deuxdude
Do you post your works anywhere besides here? Since Wattpad is finicky at the best of times, at least for me.
@deuxdude Where else do you post? Im trying to read Computer Demon, but my Wattpad says "No thats ok."
@lunaapuresoul thanks
@WormDrake I get why Y/N attacking Vox was out of character, but it's me thinking outside and giving characters freedom plus Vox was going to send Haxx and K@ry after him anyway. Still I may send him to Heaven to interact with Pentious in secret.
@WormDrake It's unavailable.
What do you guys think of the recent chapters of Hell's Killer?
@deuxdude also I left a comment on y/n praying to God for guidance and admitting how he fears he's the hotel's threat inspired by this scene. https://youtu.be/Sza-FQ13n8E?feature=shared at 1:11 Also the V Droid got me thinking of the garthim from the dark crystal, maybe have the base soldiers be able to turn into crabs, beetles and spiders or a mix match. There's even some beast designs they could take on. https://megaman.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters_by_design They could also be the souls of the aborted Vox captured and turned into monsters and slaves. So a mix of technically living zombies like those in i am legend and the garthim.
@deuxdude just wished y/n family could interact with the redeemed especially pentious and be conflicted about them being in heaven while he's still in hell.https://youtu.be/0x6usdVsGbI?si=rBGVahkMe5S6wm-X This clip being his parents confronting pentious about how he treated their son. https://youtu.be/jZOywn1qArI?si=m3JenIFkwWWJ6Ffm His grandfather confronting lilith about what she did to y/n for mothers day, demanding she make amends with Charlie, or he and the family, the last bloodline of Esau from the Bible would be a nightmare for people like her. Perhaps the voice of God telling y/n family that he now has duties as a horseman of war and heaven's shepard/sheepdog to help the repented souls find christ and home. Y/n confronting Vox in the last chapter seemed rather unlike him to be so reckless but other than that awesome work as usual.
You need to see this ok
https://youtu.be/jvb6b-9vq2U?si=rvMZF8zrRrxWHg8P
@chesencrckrs954 my apologies, I meant chapter 6; Interlopers. I was just following the wordplay through caption on YouTube. It just made things easy.
For those who recently read the 5th chapter of Monkey's Little Bastich, I humbly apologize if it looked undone. There's been a mishap. It's fixed and I do hope you can enjoy it.
@deuxdude eh, there's a few spelling errors. Also, I kinda think the interaction between Kara and Y/n was a bit... anticlimactic... I am intrigued what you have in store for episode 6.
Music: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1361042 Somewhere in Nevada . . . . . . . . . . Y/N: "..." Hank: "..." Y/N: "Hank..." Hank: "..." Y/N: "Give it to me. I need it." Hank shook his head in response Y/N: "Now, Hank. I. Want. My. CHUNKY DUNKERS!" Hank points his gun at you, causing your connection with the Angry Faic to flare, but then... AAHW swarms all around you and Hank. This beef wasn't over. Until then... *Guns clicking* The Madness calls. *BANG!* *POW!* BLAM!* *CRACK!* *RATATATATATATATAT!* Gore sounds: https://youtu.be/0L0EUX859tc?si=selVH1AjE8212DmZ Aftermath: Hank looks around to see any enemies left only to hear this https://youtu.be/MlhZVIvFlgk?si=VIFa0PYHGh9e6l4F It came from you...from eating those Chunky Dunkers. Hank was not pleased. Y/N: "Wha-" And the beef is back at it again. Happy (Belated) Madness Day, everyone!
https://youtu.be/CL8RaI97fiE?si=nKR3KkDiUhSlTUpk Something I think would hit y/n from hell's Killer hard