dragonlover499

Hey, everyone, ch.7 is out.  However, I may add additional views because it's such a short chapter.  So, you can look forward to that.  And...last but definitely not least, happy fourth of july.

I was wondering if you could dedicate a chapter to my story "Food for Thought"?

Hey guys, ch.6 is officially out and ch.7 is on it's way.  Also, in ch.4, I included a brief description of Kyla.  My new cover is a drawing of Mythsaria.

Hello everybody!!!  Sorry for not updating for a while, I've been super busy with choir and school and other things, like Easter.  So....I know you all have been waiting for chapter 5 and it's finally here.  So please read and don't forget to vote and comment.  Thanks!!!

Nawthing is that stupid with you describing yourself, but putting an adjective before idiot and basically saying the same thing sounds stupid.
          
          WRITING TIP: You don't need an adjective before everything. Same with adverbs.
          
          Barbie gracefully flung her gorgeous golden hair out, softly whispering out deceitful words to her short sister. She flauntingly said in her whispers "You just have to tell your brilliant teacher she's fat. All intelligent, brave teachers want to obviously hear that". 
          
          I made that up in the spur of the moment and you see it sounds like it's trying to hard. Some things are obvious and don't need to be said. And definitely do not say "he said humourously" after a joke a character makes. I've seen funny lines ruined by stating the obvious. But  do describe things, I need somethings to form images with.
          
          IN A NUTSHELL: Don't use an adverb after said. Don't describe the obvious "the red apple", "the yellow bumblebee". And do not describe the unneeded "she took a bite of the luscious apple".
          
          Hope you enjoyed the mini learning experience.
          Keep writing as well~

Hello, check out Makenna.  I will start writing ch 1 soon.

Hi, check out my new chapter.  Ch4.

Reworking it, huh. What will end up happening now... looking forward to it.

@_DinosaurRAWR_ @ifasiha @LegendaryLethamyr @maham_07 @shadowivy @SupItsColette @taylombardo @TheWordHurricane @watt_pad_writer @zadie245 @MahaRose@ZoFlorez hey guys, sorry for ch 4, I didn't write it that well, and will republish it in a few days after some serious editing.  thanks for understanding.

Hello, @_DinosaurRAWR_ @ifasiha @LegendaryLethamyr @maham_07 @shadowivy @SupItsColette @taylombardo @TheWordHurricane @watt_pad_writer @zadie245 @MahaRose @ZoFlorez my newest chapter is now out, chapter 4, and I just wanted to say that chapter 5 will be out soon too.  It may have some drama involved.  Thanks for following and don't forget to vote and comment.  Keep writing.