Hello, I am a struggling author who needs some feedback.  If I am making any writing mistakes, please point them out and tell me how to fix.  

Anyway, past that, I am currently in eighth grade and I have always loved reading but, until recently, I haven't been able to write my own stories.  Nothing that makes sense anyway.  However, I have gotten better.

I am very bad at describing myself, so I probably sound like a complete idiot.  Please read my books, vote, and comment.  Thanks!!!!!