Okay, wow! You have a very emotional and complex writing style. I really enjoy it. I also really like that you leave a lot unsaid. It kept me on edge not knowing what drove the friends apart and all that stuff. The only things that really caught my eye were some spelling and grammar errors on the surface. My suggestion for the plot would be to delve into the relationships of the characters more. Maybe travel back at some point to explain the fight. I am excited to see what comes out of this story! Please send me feedback on mine as well. I am interested to know which stories you're interested in! Thanks, Emma
