dustyone

New story!~ 
          	
          	Pilgrimage of the Longing Hearts!
          	
          	Status: On going
          	
          	Soli Deo Gloria!

dustyone

Blessed Lord’s Day, mga kaibigan!
          
          Nais ko lang ipabatid sa mga nagsusubaybay na sa If to Since, wari kong hindi muna ako makapag-update sa linggong ito sapagkat abalang-abala ako sa pang-akademikong gawain. Mayroon kaming Quiz, Game Demonstration at Midterm Exams. Talagang nakaka-stress, hindi ba? XD So kung inyo akong nauunawaan ay nagagalak po ako kung ganoon at maraming salamat po.
          
          Kayo’y palaging ingatan ng Panginoon na gawin ang mga bagay-bagay para sa Kaniyang kaluwalhatian. Pagpalain kayong nawa!♥️

dustyone

Studio Ghibli movies taught me that endings doesn't have to be similar of some endings in real time movies. What I mean is, in stories, most of characters, if not all, have their own dilemma or problems. And at the end of the story, they were able to conquer their difficulties (could be by someone or other characters' help). It's not always marrying, dancing, laughing, saying “yes!” to a suitor, having children, or getting rich and the like. Sometimes, endings are like facing or conquering fears, getting out from a danger zone/situation, or realizing what really the heart shouts for. For example, in the movie titled Whisper of the Heart, as the title says it, Shizuku (the lead female character) is confused and doesn't know what to do with her life. She wants to write but she's at the time captured by the thoughts that she can't do it. But in the end, she was able to write a story because that was really the whisper of her heart— instance like this is a great beginning and a great ending. Or could be that love was once hated, but now being adored. 
          
          This is what I learned from Studio Ghibli movies.

dustyone

@dustyone see hahahahaha
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serviel

hello, ate! katatapos ko lang basahin ang Alora, and sakto na nakita ko ang last message mo. ito ang total feedback ko:
          
          napakaganda ng pagkasulat mo. from first until the end. and sa buong storya ng Alora ay nai-represent mo ang Gospel sa pamamagitan kay Alora o sa pamamagitan ng paglalakbay niya. tumpak ang mga pangyayari. gulat na gulat ako sa ending! may connectivity siya, kahit ang character/s lang. you wrote it well, and i'm very astonished. that's all that i could say, ate. praise God!

dustyone

@serviel awwww. langga, thank you so much sa feedback haaaaa. i really thought na magulo at hindi organized ang pagkakasulat ko so baka confusion lang ang hatid. 
            
            thank you so much, dear. i so appreciate your time and effort.
            
            praise and glory be to our God in Heavens!
            
            God bless you, dear!♥️
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heythereManila

Hello if you’re interested to this kind of story (Christian Romance) please check this out. Salamat & God bless :)
          
          Prologue:
          
          Jakob has everything ready. Mayroon na siyang sariling bahay, sasakyan, savings, at picture frames para punuin ng mga litrato ng kanyang pamilya.
          
          Ngunit may isang kulang. Wala pa siyang asawa.
          
          Pero pano kung ang ready-to-settle-down na si Jakob ay hindi lang asawa ang makita kundi pati anak? Paano nangyaring nagka-instant family siya kung never pa niyang nakilala ang mommy ni baby?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/912113324?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=heythereManila&wp_originator=Z8ehtfoervNWj8Jwqwj383ceG3FLf44eZ7ta%2F0Rkg5eRoo8V18iY1ZNRggJ6waD0gjWr5d1UlmthXOMqz5pYDK%2BvwjZV6Utds7j0EMDeDcQ64dJFIulMcKvV%2FdrqWCM8

dustyone

hi, guys! buenas noches. itatanong ko lang sana kung sino na rito ang nagbasa ng ikatlong story ko na Alora? kasi, gusto ko lang manghingi ng inyong feedback about sa story generally. kasi, it's my first time writing spiritual and fantasy pinagsama kaya gusto ko sanang makabasa ng feedback from it. hindi naman ba kayo nalito? or ano pang thoughts ninyo..kasi sa feedback, i would know the perception of the readers na baka may need akong i-improve or whaaat. so please, if ure currently reading Alora, pls let me know haaa. i would really appreciate ur help. thank you so much! grace to you all. God bless you!