CessAggarao01

Hello~ i know i came to read and critique your works. Maganda naman siya but i think dagdagan mo siya ng excitement like: 'OMG! Ang gwapo nang mga kuya niya!' or something like that. Para mafeel nang readers yung world na ginagalawan nang character. You can also add some funny moments para maenjoy pa lalo nang readers. That's all for now. Kumonnect lang ako para mabasa ko na.
          Tuloy mo lang and i hope nakuha mo point ko hihihi. Update ka lang ah? I know you have a potential and alam ko din mag iimprove ka soon. Fighting!
          
          - Cess

elipia0709

@CessAggarao01 thank you very much po ☺️❤️
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