So, I read your book Naruto rants, and I want your opinion on my oc. please give tips on what to improve, if any. this might be lengthy, but I feel like I need your approval. here it goes:
My oc has brown hair with a red tint. its short, but choppy, she cut it herself. her eyes are bright gold ( idk, when I get contacts I plan to get this color, I really like it.) her name is Mibu ( pronounced Mee- Boo) because that is my best friends name in Japanese. she is half cat ( i really like cats, so much that my friends actually call me Sebastien!) I added her to Kiba's team, I thought it might be interesting to put her with the 'dog boy'. she was abused when she was younger, because she was different. ( its human nature to fear the unknown) because of this, she is untrusting of humans and has no friends. she just sits in the background. because she is a cat, she has a better sense of balance and flexibility, as cats do. she also sleeps a lot, again, because she is a cat. the only person she is actually comfortable with is the third Hokage, he was one of the few people who actually showed her kindness( who DOESN'T like gramps?!) she eventually makes friends with hinata, because the Hokage asked her to make friends her own age, and she wishes to repay him for his kindness. she is better at taijutsu and weaponry then anything else, she weilds weopons as her own claws. she is average at fighting, not the best, but not the worst either. she doesn't like most fangirls of sasuke BECAUSE ( notice the because ) they tend to spend more time on how they look than being ninja, and their loud squeels hurt her sensitive ears. she doesn't particularly care about how she looks, she dresses in guys clothes because they are more comfortable and easier to fight in.
please give me feedback! thanks!
