eternal_love_vk

Want me to update right now? Or after midnight?

herlovesbts

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humnam0

Heyyyyhope you get time to read this...
          I'm a silent reader despite your reprimands hehebut I still vote!
          From a fellow writer and someone who has read their fair share of Taekook fanfics, I wanted to give you some friendly advice on how to make your book better and get more responses (in my opinion at least)
          So the first thing I noticed is that you don't really proofread your chapters for the sake of updating early but trust me where we have waited 2 days we can wait another hour without dying (I hope so) but having proper proofread chapters will increase your audience.
          You also don't really crosscheck your facts for example you keep mixing JK's scent and sometimes you repeat things which kinda makes it confusing and a little bit annoying (no offense)

eternal_love_vk

@humnam0 no I was just explaining. It's absolutely alright. I remember mentioning in one chapter that I forget Jungkook 's scent and jeongguk' scent. Chocolate was jeongguk's and dark wood was Jungkook's.
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humnam0

And if my choice of words felt a little harsh I apologize for that
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humnam0

I meant absolutely no offense and I really love the book it's a comfort read but I just wanted more people to know this gem that's why I talked about audience and I absolutely understand that every writers style is different but I just remembered reading at the end of your chapters about you asking for some advice which is why I said all that. Also I did not mean that you're careless about writing I just thought the scent was mixed up a lil bit cause it was chocolate in the start but maybe the confusion was my bad so sorry for that. Thank you so much for updating and loving your reader's and I'll say it again I love the book.
            -Hugs and kisses
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eternal_love_vk

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I couldn't write three chapters ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ
          Approximately 24000 words aren't just a piece of shit to be done within minutes. 
          
          So, I'll publish a single chapter todaya nd two chapters tomorrow. Forgive me ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ
          My competative exam (that too national level) is within 30 days. I've to focus on studies as well. ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ