Hello! I am a new writer, who struggles a lot with sleep. Whenever I am lucky enough to fall asleep, I am usually with extremely vivid dreams/nightmares. These dreams are usually vivid enough to leave a lasting effect on me, and so I decided to start writing them down, and fleshing them out into short stories to hopefully turn a sleepless night into something cool! I haven't ever really written much prior to this, so I would love critiques, harsh or not. Thanks so much.