Hi all,
As you may or may not know my Chronicles of Jack Frost novel is the first draft of a fantasy idea I have been developing for a while! As it is a first draft it is no surprise that I have found things i want to change and edit, especially when it comes to structure. For those of you who have read the first chapter know that this is all about Jack's backstory. I have decided to cut that and reveal his back story throughout forthcoming chapters as I believe that to be more effective. This also therefore means Jack knows and the reader know pretty much nothing about Pitch Black or the part he played in his father's death. It is relevant that you know this for the next chapter! There fore as you read on please keep these changes in mind as it will motivate certain things characters say and do! I hope that makes sense haha! As I don't expect you to read it all again I thought it'd make sense to try and clear things up!
Chapter 8 coming this evening - a chapter where Jack and Pitch Black meet for the first time.
Many thanks,
Evangeline