No epilogue to soul snatching? Great storyline. Really like THG, you should have gone into greater detail with every kill or attempted kill after all everytimr someone dies they do kill a piece of their soul just to gain it. And to elaborate more on how it all started and the feelings of Tara's mother and jess! But that's if you don't want to keep it as a short story! Really good though especially towards the end, I read it in like 2-3hrs I was so into it!!