fairjer

@videogamegirl "Another Story About THE WAR".  I wasn't necessarily "Hooked" so much as the fact that I found it interesting.  I find that if I like one story from a writer, I will be interested in reading more and so I faned you so I would remember you.  Thanks for the message!

_Intellectual_Badass

I'm glad you agree =) 
           Personally, I don't think being a teen is an excuse for bad language skills. Teens have English classes in school, don't they? I think it's because most of them just want to get their stories on the 'What's Hot?' page so they don't really care about the writing, as much as the plot itself. Most stories I've read on here jump a lot. They go from one plot line to another in like, 3 chapters and some just drag on with no real purpose. 
           I remember back when wattpad actually had real writers with GOOD stories on the 'What's Hot?' list. I wonder how they rate the stories on there now, since it's obviously not on the writing itself. 
           Okay, I'll stop ranting now :) 
          Have a good day!
          xox
          Shireen
          
          

fairjer

@videogamegirl "Another Story About THE WAR".  I wasn't necessarily "Hooked" so much as the fact that I found it interesting.  I find that if I like one story from a writer, I will be interested in reading more and so I faned you so I would remember you.  Thanks for the message!

Davick

Hello!
          Could you please check out my book called Conjured? I've uploaded chapter four and it could really use your eyes. Please vote, comment and fan if you like it. Thanks for your valuable time.
          David 

MaYaLoVeSvAmPiReS

Hiya :D
          I have just read your story and i absolutely love it! 
          It is really good and interesting and i am LOVING Juliette's character.
          I am so happy i am your first fan! 
          Woot go me :)
          Anyways, i just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome and i love it :D
          Welcome to Wattpad by the way
          
          Marielle :)
          

Davick

Could you please read my first book called Conjured? It's a supernatural fantasy about a thirteen year old boy named Chuck. He is going to find out that he's a very rare and gifted person with the ability to conjure up just about anything the heart can dream or imagine. He will have to risk everything to save our world and his hidden, magical world called Astrum. Also resting on his shoulders is the dire need to rekindle the magic that was completely destroyed everywhere nearly thirteen years ago. Join Chuck in an adventure of a lifetime along with his best friend Alex and his newfound magical companion, a Gremble named Chaos. Ultimate magic awaits you inside the spectacular world of Conjured! 
          Please read Conjured today. The first three chapters are now available on Wattpad! Please vote and comment.
          Thanks.