Dont_Be_Scared69
Hey @fallen_angel42069 ai just read your did you miss me book, and I was wondering if I could use the insults demure uses in THAT BITCH for my own book?. I’ll tag you too!
fallen_angel42069
BabyWithAKnife
Boop!
You have been booped
Boop 20 other people and let the chaos spread
fallen_angel42069
hey
_loft_
How to join the cult
fallen_angel42069
*realized i haven't posted any new stories in like a year*
i swear there's something coming-
y'all have to hassle me for it like don't be polite and be like "oh no it's fine take ur time" no, none of that. that won't motivate me. i'm asking you to harass me for a new story or else i won't get anything done
RandomNess25417
@fallen_angel42069 GIVE USSS NEW STORYS OR ILL, UMM, RIP YOUR TEETH OUT AND UMM, COOK THEM, THEM FEED THEM TO, UMM, EVERYONE BUT YOU
fallen_angel42069
when you snap ur crush "gn" and they hit you back with the "night <3"
fallen_angel42069
if i wrote a story that is villain Izuku, quirkless Izuku, vigilante Izuku, and nezus apprentice Izuku, all wrapped in one, would you read it or is that too much plot?
Justice031429
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@fallen_angel42069 I would read it if he was like actually a good protagonist and there was a subtle ship, like a bakudeku enemies to lovers/friends with benefits I would read the shit out of with the plot you gave
Minhyeok_Mihyeok
@fallen_angel42069 I will read it. Ni questions asked. Talking 'bout storys, any recommendations on Villan Deku Storys I shoud read?
fallen_angel42069
Fun story, so my thigh has been burning for like 3 hours now because I just came back from skating, and at one point I Tokyo drifted across the floor with my thigh dragging behind me and it made a tire screeching noise that the whole rink heard (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)
fallen_angel42069
In ur opinion, is it more fun to read a minor event (like training) with lots of details and explanations, or would you rather read something that sums up said event?
Justice031429
@fallen_angel42069 i like small details when the mc is showing off to have a lot of detail other than that not really
Night-Ray
@fallen_angel42069 you could! That's a lot frustrating. It also helps if he's thinking about something else while practicing those first couple moves, then decides to focus
fallen_angel42069
I need help plz lmao
Ok so I want to write a good build up and make the readers truly understand why and how Izuku became a villain, all the things that happened to him and how it all accumulated to the result, but I don’t want the story to seem slow and boring. There’s been one major event and one suspenseful event in the total of 7 chapters I’ve pre-written, each chapter with 2000+ words, so a lot of that is like delving into izukus mind and slowly adding on more and more to the reasons he becomes a villain and his “backstory.”
I want the story to be fun and exciting- and it will in future chapters- but I don’t want first time readers to click off because it’s boring or too slow
So really, my question for y’all is:
What point in a fic do you think should the main plot begin and the buildup/backstory end?
Sleep_Deprived720
@fallen_angel42069 well, I'm no pro. Though, I think you should have a small backstory that lead up to what could be his first kill or something then cut to the present time. Then each situation cut back to his backstory then to the present. I could proofread if you want