fast1fla069

Well then, it’s come to my attention a lot of people dislike my books. Such audacity they all have to say such negative things. Such a shame, really. But oh well. To those who’ve read the book, I’m sorry but I’m discontinuing it as I can not stand nor tolerate such children with negativity.

monomaxxi

Why not try using Grammarly? It's a free program that proofreads papers for you. Should help a bit with any grammar troubles. Don't give up, keep writing. The only way to get better is with practice.
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Peeeeekaaaaaaay

@fast1fla069 if grammar is the problem,  why not have someone proofread for you? Or maybe copy it all in a some writing software to check for spelling and everything? There’s plenty of ways that you can check everything. Anyways, I’m sorry that people are being immature.
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fast1fla069

@Jazboo
          	  Thanks Jaz.. I might retire ;; 
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LunarNotFound_exe

"You need a haircut, you'll turn out just as gay as Marluxia if you don't" *Larxene would wave* "Long time no see"

fast1fla069

“Well according to my calculations I’m already gay for—, I-I MEAN UM!!” He blushed a bright somber red turning away waving shyly. “I-Indeed.. Long time..”
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fast1fla069

“Hahah, indeed!” 
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Got-It-Memorized

"Ienzo..!" The redhead grinned cheerfully, giving the other male a casual salute. "It's been a while. How's life?"

fast1fla069

“Hm? Oh! Why hello, Axel.” Ienzo softly chuckled sending a warm friendly smile to his dear friend as he waves slightly. “Indeed it has. I suppose I am well, and you?”
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s-smash___marth

Ah, greetings to you...myself. *Grins* It's very nice to actually see another person on here!

s-smash___marth

@fast1fla069 *Raises an eyebrow* Oh I see~
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fast1fla069

I-IKE! S-SHUSH!
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s-smash___marth

@fast1fla069 Me? The better version of myself? Pft- I believe the both of us are the same. We are both great in our own ways.
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fast1fla069

Well then, it’s come to my attention a lot of people dislike my books. Such audacity they all have to say such negative things. Such a shame, really. But oh well. To those who’ve read the book, I’m sorry but I’m discontinuing it as I can not stand nor tolerate such children with negativity.

monomaxxi

Why not try using Grammarly? It's a free program that proofreads papers for you. Should help a bit with any grammar troubles. Don't give up, keep writing. The only way to get better is with practice.
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Peeeeekaaaaaaay

@fast1fla069 if grammar is the problem,  why not have someone proofread for you? Or maybe copy it all in a some writing software to check for spelling and everything? There’s plenty of ways that you can check everything. Anyways, I’m sorry that people are being immature.
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fast1fla069

@Jazboo
            Thanks Jaz.. I might retire ;; 
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