Just an update,
I guess...ONC is coming along? I don't even know anymore. Anyway, the second part of the birthday from hell in Monaco Meltdown has been posted, barely edited.
We should be getting chased out of the country soonish and before the 20k words mark. Idk if I'm going to be able to fit everything I want into the rough draft before the 40k mark though. And, there are tons of things that either need expanded or cut. Oh well.
@feralfrog no! Don't lose steam! You got this. Your story is wonderful. Take a break from writing and just go back and reread it. Out loud... actually even better I have an site I use where the voices read it back to me... makes it so much more fun.
Nooooo! Where did Monaco Meltdown go?? I've been looking forward to reading it for ages, I'm just too damn slow... :( Do you think you might ever reupload it or nah? Let me know if you do! I'll dive right in :)
Just an update,
I guess...ONC is coming along? I don't even know anymore. Anyway, the second part of the birthday from hell in Monaco Meltdown has been posted, barely edited.
We should be getting chased out of the country soonish and before the 20k words mark. Idk if I'm going to be able to fit everything I want into the rough draft before the 40k mark though. And, there are tons of things that either need expanded or cut. Oh well.
@feralfrog no! Don't lose steam! You got this. Your story is wonderful. Take a break from writing and just go back and reread it. Out loud... actually even better I have an site I use where the voices read it back to me... makes it so much more fun.
Hi! I just saw that the ONC Pop Up book club we're in is shutting down after this week. I'm reaching out to all the members in our group to see if we wanted to continue reviewing each other's books? I'm happy to set up a new book/PM with assignments for the week. I'd just love to finish up the club until ONC is done :) Let me know what you think!
@Bdicocco
I'm fine with continuing with a new club, though I kinda need a fourth chapter that doesn't completely suck first . I'll post up what I have at the end of this week.
My state is in lockdown now, so I have plenty of time for it.
Double update for Monaco Meltdown! 3147 words! Chapter one has also been edited to make Martin seem a little more human, but I still don't quite like it yet