Following
Sign up to join the largest storytelling community
or
fieldsparrow007
Oct 20, 2019 03:47PM
Hey everyone, thank you so much for reading my story! It really means a lot to me! But I would like some feedback: does my story drag on too long? Like long enough to bore you out of the book? This m...View all Conversations
Story by fieldsparrow007
Powerless
"Bye Scalon." I whispered. "Don't get in trouble for this, okay?"
He looked up at me and...
