fieldsparrow007

Hey everyone, thank you so much for reading my story! It really means a lot to me! But I would like some feedback: does my story drag on too long? Like long enough to bore you out of the book? This might just be my self esteem wilting, but I would like your honest opinions. Is the book less-engaging? 
          	
          	Thanks again!!! 
          	Fieldsparrow007