finnskindofwoman

“Stranger” update! 
          
          I’ve been spending the last few days basically rewriting every chapter because I wasn’t happy with them. So for those who have been here from the beginning: be warned that a lot of details changed.
          
          The two biggest differences are that I removed a character (ma’kai) and changed the movie premiere chapters almost entirely (10-12). I also changed all of the social media posts in chapter 15.
          
          Sorry you guys are currently my guinea pigs, but I’ll try to post 1-2 new chapters weekly from now on!

Hello, how are you? How old are you? Because from your writing, it feels like you are a professional writer. When I analyzed your story, I found it very attractive. Your writing style uff, wow, it’s amazing! Where did you learn this style from?

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