flawedflaws

Ok so I need help. I have to write a dystopian 100 word story. I have no idea how to write in dystopian and I need feedback please.
          	
          	“You have to let me come,” I said following the General. He glanced back at me but kept walking. We kept walking past the tents and towards the war. He turned around and stared at me straight in the eye. “Listen here kid, this is war. The real war. You won’t survive out here so leave.” I protested but he barely looked at me. “You can’t possibly know that. You need me, I know this place better than all of you.” He sighed and ran a hand down his face. “Fine, go get ready, he pointed to one of the tents. I ran over there and put on the suit like everyone else. I stepped out of the tent, determined to make this right.

lalalalawriting

Hi! How are you?!
          I just wanted to say THANK YOU for reading my stories! AND I can’t believe you have a special reading list DEDICATED to my stories only!!! That is such a huge compliment!
          I hope all is well! :)

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flawedflaws

@lalalalawriting Of course! Your welcome! :))
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lalalalawriting

I’m good! Can’t complain! Thank you for asking! :) 
            And omg, that’s still just so kind of you to say AND do! My mind is blown in the best possible way! Thank you, thank you, thank you again and again and again!!!!! <3 :)
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flawedflaws

Ok so I need help. I have to write a dystopian 100 word story. I have no idea how to write in dystopian and I need feedback please.
          
          “You have to let me come,” I said following the General. He glanced back at me but kept walking. We kept walking past the tents and towards the war. He turned around and stared at me straight in the eye. “Listen here kid, this is war. The real war. You won’t survive out here so leave.” I protested but he barely looked at me. “You can’t possibly know that. You need me, I know this place better than all of you.” He sighed and ran a hand down his face. “Fine, go get ready, he pointed to one of the tents. I ran over there and put on the suit like everyone else. I stepped out of the tent, determined to make this right.

NikkiPierceBooks

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