Fiona

Hey. I really like the words that you write and I don't think you're bad at all. You just need to say the words aloud after you're done writing before you publish, and check that the words match the beat/rhythm. Overall it wasn't bad at all. You've got potential. Check me out and comment if you decide to read a story of mine. I hate when people read and don't tell me what they thought. Good luck writing! 

Welcome to wattpad, hope you like my works! I'll try to read you stuff too ^^