Hello!
I have read a chapter tonight of Silent Reign. I am slow reader, and I take my time to really understand the work of others, and not just vote for the sake of voting.
I will provide also my most honest feedback in the best of my ability and through the shoes of like you, a writer.
First, I love the cover art. Do you have an artist or what?
The imagery was good. The story reminds me of a movie, the city of Ember, though there was no Under and Upper worlds there. They are living underground.
Anyways, the first chapter I've read is good. I will read on tomorrow night again (this is a bedside habit by the way ).