freshlaidfiction

Hi everyone! 
          
          I just wanted to give a little update!
          
          I’m currently going back through the story and revising earlier chapters to improve the writing, pacing, and overall flow. While the plot itself isn’t changing, I want to make sure the story unfolds at the pace I originally envisioned.
          
          First and foremost, thank you so much to everyone who’s taken the time to read, vote, comment, or support this story in any way. This is my very first novel, so seeing people connect with Daisy and Mr. Edwards has honestly meant more to me than I can put into words.
          
          Since this is my first story, I’ve learned a lot as I’ve continued writing, and I want the earlier chapters to reflect that growth. My goal is to make the reading experience as immersive and enjoyable as possible from beginning to end.
          
          I’ve always envisioned this story as an intense slow-burn romance. One that builds naturally, keeps you eagerly turning the pages, and eventually delivers a psychological twist that I can’t wait for you all to experience. I promise the overall plot and ending are staying the same; I’m simply refining the journey to get there.
          
          Thank you again for your patience, encouragement, and support. It truly means the world to me, and I hope you’ll continue this journey with Daisy and Mr.Edwards. ❤️

This was probably the best story i have ever read. I am beyond amazed and i need you to continue it
          I literally loved it so much its so well written

Hi 
          First of all, your book was amazing and second of all we need book 2. 
          I love how daisy forgive tom so easily but what I hate the most is Tom's anger issue but I know there is a reason why he is like that but I hope he becomes a better person just for daisy. This is really a good book love it 

Hello!! I finally caught up to the latest chapter and I just wanted to let you know about how good your writing is, I was literally on the edge of my seat throughout each chapter, you highlighted how it felt on both Daisy's and Tom's side but you also didn't forget to mention how fucked up the whole relationship was which was soooo good (not to forget about how greatly written the intimate chapter were, I was literally that one abby lee miller picture). Please keep up the amazing work, I can't wait to see what happens between those two!!