7uudee
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Hello!! I finally caught up to the latest chapter and I just wanted to let you know about how good your writing is, I was literally on the edge of my seat throughout each chapter, you highlighted how it felt on both Daisy's and Tom's side but you also didn't forget to mention how fucked up the whole relationship was which was soooo good (not to forget about how greatly written the intimate chapter were, I was literally that one abby lee miller picture). Please keep up the amazing work, I can't wait to see what happens between those two!!
freshlaidfiction
@7uudee yes I am working on length! Thank you for that feedback, I know they are on the shorter side and I think it’s because I am a huge fan of Frieda McFadden’s thrillers and she has very short, intense chapters. I tried to mimic her style! I will attempt to make some of them longer, especially for my next story after this one comes to an end. Thank you again ❤️
7uudee
@freshlaidfiction Awww that’s so sweet. I’m actually so invested in how this ends because of the latest two chapters I was literally holding my breath while reading cause I was so nervous. The only thought I have is if the chapters were a teensy bit longer, you’re writing is too good that I skimp over it too fast but ultimately the length does make sense
freshlaidfiction
Hello!! Thank you SO much! This just made my whole 2026 already, LOL. I love that you love the story! I have so many ideas for how I want to end this book and it makes me so excited you are following along and also excited to see how it ends. Seriously thank you for your support and feedback. Feel free to tell me all your thoughts, good or bad! They are so appreciated ❤️