VerticalEdge74

          "Don't touch me. I am not fire... I am lava. Anyone who stays close to me turns to ash. My burns never return to life. Don't waste yourself on me."He turned away and walked out, not even remembering when he had entered.
          
          Sahibo... God does not belong to you alone. In His eyes, there is no difference between a nobleman and a courtesan. If He cannot make your heart beat for me, then let it beat for someone who can never be yours. Only then will you truly understand the depth of my love.
          
          Roshni let out a long sigh and closed the door, as if sealing his presence inside. Then, with quiet resolve, she began preparing for the mehfil. She, too, needed a distraction.
          
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ArchuArchie

Hey Sweety, 
          
          Thank you so much for checking on my ongoing work  DEVIL PRINCESS. 
          
          I cannot explain how happy I am to see your votes on them. 
          
          Also I have been told that the first 7 to 8 chapters tone down the book by confusing people with names of many kingdoms and characters. 
          
          I have been told that the book gears off after the 8th chapter. Since you are one of the serious readers, I want to understand from your POV whether the first few chapters are pulling down the book. 
          
          Help me with your genuine feedback so that I can come up with a better way to write the backstory of the Devil Princess aka Rajkumar Suryakantha. 

ArchuArchie

Hey Sweety,
          
          Thank you for reading BEHIND THE VEIL and MAYAVI PREMINI. How kind of you❤️

ArchuArchie

@friendstyle Thank you so much for the compliment, Sweety ❤ I would keep your words in my heart always. 
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friendstyle

Hello Archie , your books seem to have a unique perspective that I find is missing from most of the Wattpad books nowadays, they feel like a refreshing breath of fresh air , I honestly really loved your book behind the veil, I hope you continue to write many more books like that . Wishing you all the very best ❤️
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