Thank you @RJOriginals for the advice, I'll try to make my stories more entertaining I've got the whole story planned out but I don't want to ruin it by my bad writing so, I'll carry this on and keep improving my writing skills. ( ◜‿◝ )
Your story is interesting it’s in my library to read (when I have a bit more time) and you don’t have bad writing, no writing is bad but good writing comes when you edit and get feedback from other people