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@WillTheAmourshipper Will you shut the fuck up. Sorry for cursing, I usually love to be civil, but hating on people with the intent of hurting feelings isn't ok. I'm sure he didn't really care, but there may be some who will, so just shut the fuck up. Give him CONSTRUCTIVE criticism sure, but at the very least offer ways to improve before saying "Your writing is bad" and don't say that even if you offer ways to improve. You should be disappointed in yourself, but you won't see this comment anyway, but what the fuck ever