Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. Some people vote but no one comments. It would be a great help if you give me some insights.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

S_for_candy

Hey sorry for entering your conversation box.
          I just wanted you to spare some time and have a look at my book. I am not at all a famous author and your support means a lot. Pls vote and comment if you like it.
          
          Thank you and once again sorry for entering your conversations.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362674390?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=S_for_candy

TheresaLambe

Thank you for adding  Sexy Domain to your reading lists.  Please sit back and let the Mistress handle all your naughty sexcapades, as she so enjoys it.  If there are any you’d like to wish to be enticed upon, let her know; she’s always willing to try.  And if there’s a Sexcapade you’d like to see more of, or become a story, drop her love note, she likes those too.