gvryel64

Hello friends, followers and passers by,
          	
          	Thank you to everyone who is reading the new/revised edition of ON EARTH'S ALTAR. I do hope you're enjoying it.
          	
          	A quick note on the revision process. Since I am revising a major plot line, I may need to make unanticipated and retroactive changes to the published material.
          	
          	The first one is changing one of the main character's name from Barchet back to the original, Barshman. This is a significant change, since the character's name and its origin is central to the plot.
          	
          	Always happy to answer questions.
          	
          	Happy reading and writing!
          	
          	GFB
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	As you read the story, you will appreciate how important the character's name is.

gvryel64

Hello friends, followers and passers by,
          
          Thank you to everyone who is reading the new/revised edition of ON EARTH'S ALTAR. I do hope you're enjoying it.
          
          A quick note on the revision process. Since I am revising a major plot line, I may need to make unanticipated and retroactive changes to the published material.
          
          The first one is changing one of the main character's name from Barchet back to the original, Barshman. This is a significant change, since the character's name and its origin is central to the plot.
          
          Always happy to answer questions.
          
          Happy reading and writing!
          
          GFB
          
          
          
          
          
          
          As you read the story, you will appreciate how important the character's name is.

lyttlejoe

@gvryel64
          Did we fall asleep while writing? Yoo hoo, next chapter please.  (grin)

gvryel64

@lyttlejoe lol
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lyttlejoe

@gvryel64 
            Relieved. Don't know the emergency number for your neck of the woods.
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gvryel64

Still typing away! I’m not just editing but significantly changing certain characters and plot elements.
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Amyiah709

  Heyy could you read my book 
          And leave comments if you like 
          I’m a new writer to wattpad I’m grateful for anything ❤️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/324768220?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Amyiah709&wp_originator=bVRd0UeZr3Xb5lqETB61E9xtoNOKsHt8hg3t8DYHrf8p5sa05jkczBfnBzctvdKSBcKNYz2Tjt%2F7QRMABLzW5A2mO9gPqx75as6Obdu8QyCymU3SWcNbuFHFB9FLvXdy

lyttlejoe

Hey, thanks so much for taking a look at The Librarian. Didn't think you'd try a western for some reason.
          Hope it proves entertaining

lyttlejoe

@Frode92 
            In the interest of transparency, it was as the blurb said - one reason for her to leave. I'm afraid it isn't featured.
            But later on there is some dabbling in trauma.
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gvryel64

I’m a physician and, well, you had me at cholera
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gvryel64

Hello friends, followers and passersby,
          
          I've reposted the final edited version of ON EARTH'S ALTAR for anyone who's interested in reading, re-reading, or picking up where they left off when I so rudely pulled it back in 2020.
          
          Be well,
          
          GFB

lyttlejoe

@gvryel64 
            Did not associate the new username with such old comments!  ;D)
            I remember quite a bit of the story, and will probably give it another go. Can't believe the Chapter O (old Prologue) is till dedicated to me.
            This is a long time in the works - hope you are satisfied with your efforts.
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